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LetMeGoPlease

Student
Dec 5, 2020
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Wrote this many years ago. No idea if it's any good but I'll share it anyway.


man on the moon

i do not know how i came here
or where i was before
i know no past, no future and
no present anymore

as far as i can see there is
an ocean of grey dust
a crescent earth throws feeble light
down on the lifeless crust

i am not sure if i can hear
not sure if i can smell
i can't be sure if i can taste
there is no way to tell

i think i speak but i'm not sure
i feel my voice inside
but even if, i can't be heard
as no one is in sight


the earth above, it shines so blue
and green and brown and white
what is up there, and why is it
so colourful and bright?

there must be pain, there must be joy
and much more, I believe
there must be life, there must be warmth
there must be air to breathe

a faint recall, was i once there?
delusion, it would seem
i might have been, but then again
that might have been a dream


i dare not drop my gaze again
but soon or late i must
and see that i'm still standing here
in emptiness and dust

i wish the earth would go away
and nevermore come back
then i would not see anymore
what painfully i lack


again somewhere a rock strikes down
and smashes up the ground
i only feel the shake, there was
no glimpse and there's no sound

and one of them might once come down
right on my head, don't know
if i'm afraid of it or if
i wish that it be so
I love this poem!
 
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I amused myself with Photoshop to make the avatar and the banner and this is the result:
 

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weepingfree

weepingfree

Time’s tide will smother you, and I will too
Feb 28, 2020
71
I liked whoever said that my country was founded by an extreme cult. I’m American. I want to leave the cult.



Blankets, sheets, barren space
Clean and empty public face
Trash trucks, bullies, playground bruised
They said the kid was pale brand new

I was at a 7 at age 13
Rate how bad you want to die
I was at a ten late last night
Deep in a hole, below the line

Doctor looking in my eye
Mucus and tears and grind and grind
They diagnose, they prescribe
This Fever Kid, they try and try

We used to catch stink bugs on the playground
Torture them shits, throw em out
Childhood games, a body bends
Torture til the very end
 
weepingfree

weepingfree

Time’s tide will smother you, and I will too
Feb 28, 2020
71
Brutesy… yezzzz
 
weepingfree

weepingfree

Time’s tide will smother you, and I will too
Feb 28, 2020
71
hello! did u make everything? what daw do u use? i also dabble in ableton :D
Hey, yeah that’s all my instruments and stuff. My friend helped me on songwriting

yes, all ableton, although maybe i recorded vox in Logic. Hardware mastering from someplace… really official